Revenge is sweet

Heres the first of the two pieces i've promised.
Brownie points to who can guess who got they're revenge!


Darkness surrounds me
I crawl, along dark alleys

I enter a street,
The roar of motorbikes passing me
Hiding in bins so i'm not seen

My master is dead
I'm all alone

I recognise the building in front of me
As being the bar where he died
I feel anger building up in me
And flames lick at the side of it

Heat and smoke overwhelm me
I scamper away, through the sewers
Avoiding the rats and pigs

I have got my revenge!


Frankie sat in the gutter, tears rolling down his face. Betty and Jane were milling around, flirting with the Shivers and Firemen that were clearing up the wreckage from his bar.

He'd lost everything, nearly 8 years of hard work gone just like that. The fire had been so sudden but it had wiped out everything, destroyed all of the premises.

Mike and his girl came down the street heading to the Arcade, but they stopped short when they saw the burnt shell of the bar. Mike ran up to Frankie, visible shaken.

"It's gone Mike, all gone. No more White Goat, no more juke box. All gone."


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